Fifty-page Fiction or Non-fiction Edit

Fifty pages easily reveal inconsistencies and weaknesses in character, plot and setting; in voice and level of diction; in conflict and tension; and in grammar and punctuation. Use these notes to self-edit the rest of your manuscript.

Send twenty-five pages of fiction or non-fiction. Please double-space and use a 12-pt font.

Give me ten days after receiving your package. I will give the pages a mindful reading and return them marked with suggestions. 

I'll also write 750-800 words detailing where craft is working particularly well for you and where it is not working so well. 


Please send a cheque or money order for $150 CAD made out to Ursula Vaira, 
or email to
Ursula Vaira, Box 416, Lantzville BC V0R 2H0